Topic: Chapter 2: A Life That Was Good

Ellea Cainn

Date: 2013-02-24 11:52 EST
Today wasn't one of those days when the sunlight got to crawl across the floor and up the bed to warm Declan's cheek to wake him up. Today was a work day, and it was set to begin early in the shop, so his father came into his room before daylight to startle him out of his slumber. He was fourteen years old and procrastinative like fourteen was, but that was rapidly moving out as responsibility was moving in. Just as he came to, he heard his father speak what he must have been repeating for some odd minutes.

?I need you at the store today, Declan. Come on, it's time to get up.? Malcolm DonEvans gently shook him until it was obvious to him that his son's eyes were open. ?Get ready, boy. It's a busy day today.?

Malcolm exited Declan's room ahead of him, going down the hall of their modest little home to go give a kiss to his wife, Theresia. Declan stepped out next, barefoot and lightly dressed in just his sleep shorts and a shirt. Obviously still tired, he knew just the thing to wake him up and headed out the open back door. The sun still hid over the edge of the forest where the trees all melded into one, but its light already filled the skies and foretold its impending rise before all this cooling air and relaxed shade would be gone. He plunged his hands into the wash basin against the wall outside and cupped his hands full of the cold water to splash his face. He emerged from his hunch over the bowl with his chin dripping and his eyes ablaze with life.

Now he was awake. Exhaling some of the excitement that had just been rushed through him, he took a moment to overlook his country like he did every morning, and its beauty was always there waiting, never fading or diminishing in any way. He smirked at it just as he often did, morning after morning, and wiped his face up to his crown to pat down his protruding bed hair. As if on cue, his mother called him in to get a bite of breakfast before heading out with his father.

Inside gathered around the busy dining table, Declan took a seat beside of his younger sister, Seara, and a very noticeable atmosphere of sibling harassment and playful teasing sat down with them.

?What are you doing up so early? You don't have to work,? Declan announced with a mouthful of toast.

?I'm not that much younger than you, you know, Dick,? Seara retorted, already telling that her brother was up to his usual unfriendliness so early in the morning, so she closed her eyes and continued her bite without having to look at him.

?A whole year younger!? He exclaimed, as if how could she forget the importance of this fact.

?Mom!? Seara whined to Theresia over by the counter, who was replacing the flower in the vase that sat on the window sill with the one Malcolm had freshly snipped.

?Declan, let your sister enjoy her breakfast,? she said. ?Today she has to help me in the vegetable garden and pick up some things with me at the market. She's got a very busy day, so maybe you should make sure you know what you're talking about before you open your mouth next time.? She didn't need to look her son's direction, sensing he was already realizing his overstepping and probably with a surprised smirk; and of course he had to stay his tongue even though his sister was showing hers at him.

Catching up with his father on the road after breakfast, he looked back at their home that had been fortunate enough to have so much country and privacy all to itself. Amongst their community that shared the market at the end of the road, only two other homes were noticeable and stood in the distance across the plain. Everything was green and everything was healthy and full of life as far as the eye could see. Grass and tall stalks and tree limbs all danced whenever the wind blew instead of bend or lean uncharacteristically, and such a full-bodied environment could only harbor a friendly and happy people. Truly, they had not known another way of living here in the province of Hamelin.

Today was a private walk without a wagon or buckboard in sight from either end of the sand-colored road. Because it ran as far as the eye could see from their house, travelers a great distance away would remain in sight for a very long time before ever meeting them. Most mornings, travelers did use the road, and when this would happen, Declan's father would be too distracted to converse with him. This morning he was very talkative, and had to fill the silence with something other than the crushed rock beneath their feet.

?You know our old neighbor, Jim Bardens, told me once a long time ago before he passed away ? before you were born ? that this was a terrible walk just to scratch a living. His legs weren't so good, and I don't think he made enough money in his modest shop tanning leather. In-fact, I'm sure he hated it. But he walked to work with me every day until he died. I've had my own frivolous complaints over the years.? While he reminisced, his walk slowed to a stop so he could look back to try and see if the roof of their house had sunk behind the country yet. It was always somewhat saddening for him because it meant that his wife, daughter, and their protection were out of his reach, but they had to go to work. That was just how it was. His deep sigh was heard by his son who also stopped when he had gotten too far ahead. Malcolm snapped out of it and caught back up with him, continuing their commute as well as his point.
?The road is too cold in the winter, and too narrow by the lake for most wagons. We had to go without for a little while so we could pay to repair our own wagon after it rolled off there. That was a harsh month, I remember. But even still... I cannot call my life anything but a blessing.? As they walked, Malcolm placed his hand on Declan's head, and when he looked up at him, his hand then moved to his shoulder and seized him proudly.

Nothing but fertile and unoccupied prairie as far as the eye could see on either side of the road, and a glamorous lake stretched far and wide at the bend of the road forming an infinite edge with the horizon that the sun melted into every evening. All of it was beautiful, and none of it strange, except for the alienated mountain that was a ghost of a white color where distance began to fade things that people neither questioned or trust.

Ellea Cainn

Date: 2013-03-25 18:20 EST
Work was slow starting and the early morning hours dragged on. Nearer noon, Declan's mother and sister came into market just as they had said. Wearing a tool-apron of assorted cobbler tools, Declan spotted them out the window making down the road. Likewise, his sister Seara had spotted him and the two waved at one another despite their early morning bickering. Fighting and teasing aside, they really loved each other dearly as was how they were brought up.

?Ah, there's Theresia and Seara. Would you like to go say hello to them?? Malcolm asked, coming up to him by the window.

?Are you sure?? Declan asked back, well aware that a number of orders needed to be completed before close today.

?I'm sure,? he said, and the boy smiled. ?Just take this out to your mother when you go. There's a good lad.? Handing a small package to his son, he rustled his hair and cupped his cheek briefly before going to the back room to continue on their work orders.

Declan drew the package in close to him and headed out the front door right away. On the side of the street, five or six people had been walking, and the one closest to him he carefully navigated around before crossing the road to go and greet his mother and sister, but only as a secondary objective. He was a young man, but a man most importantly, and he was looking for any moment to show that, so he wore a face of responsibility for them, handing his mother the package which was his first priority.

?Thank you, Declan,? his mother laughed, taking the bundle and observing her son with delight, knowing full well that he couldn't grow up fast enough; and just to annoy him, she motherly combed his hair tidier, aggravating him almost instantly.

?Mooom!? he groaned, and Seara giggled.

?What's dad doing?? Seara asked, always curious about her dear dad and more so than Declan who was with him most of the work week.

?He's starting on some of our orders. We've got a lot this week.? Declan looked back at the store with his hands on his hips, thoughtfully, as if he were a grown-up with all these real problems.

?It sounds like you two will be working very hard this afternoon. You'll need something to keep your strength up.? Theresia looked to her daughter by her side whom she entrusted the food basket filled with Malcolm and Declan's lunch. Seara handed it to her brother very tenderly, anxious to alleviate his work load and stress he was showing, even though it had only been an act he was putting on to seem more like a burdened, busy adult.

?Don't work too hard, Declan,? Seara said, handing him the basket and he accepted it begrudgingly, another show put on.

?Yeah, I won't,? he replied. ?You two be safe as well. Don't spend too much in market. That money's hard to come by.? He smirked his lips back and sighed as well, checking the traffic up the road while shielding his eyes from the sunlight. Again, Theresia resisted laughter but could not hide the enjoyment on her beautiful features.

?We'll see you at dinner. Tell your father he's loved.? Another hand came to modify Declan's mismanaged hair that was dodged after the fact and it tickled her.

?Yeah, see you,? he said.

?Bye Declan,? Seara called to him while starting back on her walk with her mother to procure the items off of a modest grocery list. Her waving hand continued long enough to remind Declan of the love his sister had for him. It penetrated his tough, hardened, and emotionless grown-up act to the core and left him there perplexed and a teenager once again. Not even thinking, he waved to his sister and mother, and for even longer than she had waved to him.

Back inside DonEvans Shoes, he caught the rare sight of his father at work all to himself in this environment. Declan had seen this often, despite it being a rarity, and each time it captured him in a new, unforgettable way. The moves he made and the steps he took were all fluid and soft. There was no excruciating labor in this job. Only time; only patience. That being said, the accumulated work that went into any finished product could be intimidating. A pair of completed shoes in all their moderately unnoticed magnificence bore hundreds of opportunities for a weaker or shoddier job that could still pass as functional, but not any out of DonEvans shop. It was unsaid and silent, and when it was not silent it was quiet that Malcolm was determined to do the very best that he could at his job every single time.

At lunch they always sat on the back steps that shared the same yard with the back's of several neighboring businesses. Their managers would come out and run some errands and do some lighter work on outdoor equipment that couldn't go inside their shops, and they'd wave and greet one another as was a comfort and a pleasantry they could look forward to every day at work.

Sitting down with Declan, Malcolm unmade the carefully tucked stripe-patterned cloth that covered their lunch. Exposing the assorted foods, he first took the length of bread and broke it, handing the unnoticeably larger half to his son. The food was good to Declan, reawakening him in a way when his taste buds came to life. But his father Malcolm reacted far stronger, exclaiming with a mouthful of their prepared lunch so that it frightened him that something terrible must have been wrong.

?Your mother has outdone herself!? he said, confusing his son for the time it took him to calm down and wonder just what was wrong with him to react so strongly to something so plain and ordinary as some bread.

Malcolm caught onto his displeasure at his little scene and silently reconciled with him to enjoy the peace and quiet for awhile. If someone had been paying attention, Declan might have been embarrassed, and it plastered a contented grin on his father's face while he ate away at his lunch.

?Don't look so hard all the time for something big to happen, son. You'll miss what's really important that's already in-front of you.? He finished chewing his block of cheese and rinsed it down with a gulp of wine from a cute leather flask that had been tucked in the corner of the basket, and with his son holding out for additional explaining, he surprisingly offered it to him.

?Don't tell your mother,? he said.

The answers he was searching for became distant thoughts now with his father's wine presented before him. He accepted it and ushered himself into self-proclaimed maturity, sharing an adult drink with his dad. After trying to drink a little too much, Malcolm pulled it from his lips while enjoying the always-photogenic view of the horizon.

Ellea Cainn

Date: 2013-03-28 03:12 EST
The next day was more of the same. Declan and his sister antagonized one another, and yet when he scraped his knee chasing her on the road outside, she was the one that applied the ointment to him. All of the frivolous things were discarded when something actually important came up, and family was the most important thing. That was how they were being raised, and it made them strong as a result of that.

?Thanks,? he said, embarrassed.

Seara pouted her lips and blushed a little. She had already gathered his appreciation by his silence. Actually saying it made things awkward, because now she had to say something, and she didn't want to throw his thanks to the wind and say that he shouldn't have been chasing her. She settled with simple response.

?You're welcome,? she hushed and helped him up in time for their mother to call them in to breakfast.

They worked another day where everything fell into place as predicted. They met their deadlines, receive their payment, purchased what they needed and shared the same walk at sundown on the road lit orange for the duration. Malcolm and Declan laughed in retelling the story from earlier in the day about one of the shopkeeper's having extended difficulty catching one of his roosters. It was a much-appreciated comedic recess from the usual, boring grind. The end of their walk always concluded on the blue, almost gray road with the sun having gone down entirely behind them. It was one of many things that foretold the upcoming meal with the whole family.

One morning, Malcolm woke Declan up at his bedside with a particularly swell marriage of urgency and gentility.

?Wake up, Declan. Wake up,? he said.

?Huh?' Declan mumbled with his pillow suppressing some of his voice.

?We have an order to finish for a family by tomorrow. Put your clothes on. We're going to be working late tonight.?

It was the most serious that Declan ever heard his father sound. It wasn't especially terrifying news, but this was when he would get the most worried. What if an order wasn't completed in time and they weren't paid? Would they still have food on the table? Would it jeopardize the integrity of his shop to do what they say they'll do? Malcolm did care about the reputation of his store, and Declan understood that. He nodded to his father, though he was still quite tired, and at least gave him the benefit of not needing to check back on him a second time. He'd be ready, just after this deal with his body to get up after he granted it a few more seconds in bed.

Breakfast at least truly woke him up, but for Malcolm, his constant worry had done that before anything else could have. By the time he had finished getting dressed, which usually he completed after Declan had finished eating, he was walking from his bedroom to the door, and it could only be assumed he expected Declan to follow out with him.

?Just take it with you, Declan,? Theresia said, taking his shoulders and kissing his forehead since a hug a bit more time than Malcolm seemed to be willing to part with this morning.

Declan took the toast in his mouth while slipping his coat on and headed to follow his father for what promised to be a truly meaningful workday.

?Bye, Mom. Bye, Seara,? he said.

?Bye Dick!? Seara called after her brother, already heading out the door and down the steps.

Catching up to his father on the road, Declan looked back to their quaint house and looked curious for a moment. He wasn't sure why with the responsibility he'd been waiting all this time for finally come to the shop, but he couldn't stop thinking about how much he would have rather stayed home today.