"Better pass boldly into that other world, in the full glory of some passion, than fade and wither dismally with age." ?James Joyce
To those viewing from orbit, New Detroit was a true representation of itself and its population - tired, inhospitable, and scarred. Most of the surface was covered with land masses and its rare bodies of water were too small to be visible from space. Lakes, ponds, and springs were more myth than reality for the planet's inhabitants who guzzled imported liquid with the unslakable thirst of man who knowingly succumbs to a desert mirage, clutching to the fantasy of salvation and life while surroundings and circumstances could only result in a terrible unstoppable demise. Intertwined as if wrought together by a master of intricate needlework, long metallic gray pipelines, dark jagged manmade chasms carved in a rush to reap the ambrosia of raw metals and now sucked dry of their contents, and long strips of deep orange and red ore exposed from massive tears in the planet's unwilling flesh, crisscrossed over the surface, mechanized scars from a surgery gone horribly right. New Detroit was a planetary Frankenstein, divided, conquered, and mutilated by the unrelenting tools of greed. Long dead corpses, so artfully stitched together under the careful watch of scientists and hurried urgings of profiteers, grotesquely came together in this haunting orb. Staring at the planet was like staring into a decaying soul ? too long and you would lose yourself in the sadness and despair which radiated from the gray and the red, the body and its ebbing blood, the slow agony of a death that loomed but never arrived.
Hadrian?s Gorge, a long stretch of land located deep within one of the gutted mammoth mining chasms, was a microcosm of the planet as seen from above. Between the glut of seedy dive bars, Frej-addicted whores, and black-market dealers hardly making an effort to front legitimate businesses to cover their transactions ? set between mountainous disfigured walls of rock serving as stark reminders of the physical and emotional scars of its inhabitants ? a mercenary could certainly find herself at home. But Estella Tiri didn't feel at home, not at all. Truth be told, although this place was certainly safer for her than elsewhere in the quadrant, or even on the planet, she hated it. But money was here, good money, and she wanted her share.
The casual observer would likely never pick out one place from another down here from memory; it all looked the same and the smart black-marketeers would exchange shops and stalls frequently to throw off anyone who might be looking to put an end to their business. But they always let their best customers know how to reach them. And she was definitely a good customer. She was about to prove it yet again.
Even as she walked, winding her way through the alleys and man-made paths that served as streets which often carved through shells of old buildings that, for one reason or another, were never demolished, she tried to avoid looking anyone in the eye. That was one easy way to get killed down here, especially given the temperment of the local population. Most everyone was paranoid. Most everyone was desperate to leave, looking for an excuse to take out their pent-up frustrations on a passer-by for no reason other than it would make them feel better for a moment or two. The money enticed them to stay, no matter the personal cost.
She didn?t bother trying to mask her path or change her route; if she was being followed, those doing the following would not fall for the simple tactics she could employ. Besides, she didn?t want to spend any more time down here than she had to. Each step brought her closer to her goal and she wasn?t going to delay. Her boots kicked up loose dirt and tread over rotted wood and rusted out metal in a quick rhythm, often interrupted by an the crunch of plastic as she trod upon the empty Frej-tubes whose contents were annihilating the brains and lives of over half the population. The people were destitute, the buildings were destitute, even the air seemed to instill a sense of despair that would rot her from the inside out if she breathed too deeply. She quickened her pace.
A few moments later, upon reaching her destination, she entered a dilapidated metal shack upon which hung an unlit half rotted ?Erroch Repairs? sign, its letters nearly falling off the rusty nails barely keeping them in place, and subjected to the invasive personal search and questioning which followed. No, she didn?t have any weapons. Yes, she was here to see Scheff. Yes, he knew she was coming.
She surmised that this bodyguard was new because she hadn?t ever seen him before and he seemed to be staring entirely too hard at her, as if trying to will her answers to turn into lies underneath his glare.
?Where?s Frank,? she asked, trying to show NewGuy that yes, she had seen Scheff before.
?Dead,? was the grunted reply.
?Ah,? she replied, unsurprised. Playing bodyguard for a successful (and thus nefarious) black market merchant was, after all, dangerous.
?Go ahead,? NewGuy?s gruff voice was mirrored by the brusque way he gestured toward the entryway to the rear of the shop. He seemed disappointed that she?d been able to pass his muster.
?Don?t worry,? she thought as she moved past him, ?you?ll get your chance sooner rather than later down here. And you?ll probably wind up next to Frank in whatever ditch he?s lying in.?
((Authors' Note: This thread will be cross-posted in the Duel of Fists folder on the Rings of Honor message board))
To those viewing from orbit, New Detroit was a true representation of itself and its population - tired, inhospitable, and scarred. Most of the surface was covered with land masses and its rare bodies of water were too small to be visible from space. Lakes, ponds, and springs were more myth than reality for the planet's inhabitants who guzzled imported liquid with the unslakable thirst of man who knowingly succumbs to a desert mirage, clutching to the fantasy of salvation and life while surroundings and circumstances could only result in a terrible unstoppable demise. Intertwined as if wrought together by a master of intricate needlework, long metallic gray pipelines, dark jagged manmade chasms carved in a rush to reap the ambrosia of raw metals and now sucked dry of their contents, and long strips of deep orange and red ore exposed from massive tears in the planet's unwilling flesh, crisscrossed over the surface, mechanized scars from a surgery gone horribly right. New Detroit was a planetary Frankenstein, divided, conquered, and mutilated by the unrelenting tools of greed. Long dead corpses, so artfully stitched together under the careful watch of scientists and hurried urgings of profiteers, grotesquely came together in this haunting orb. Staring at the planet was like staring into a decaying soul ? too long and you would lose yourself in the sadness and despair which radiated from the gray and the red, the body and its ebbing blood, the slow agony of a death that loomed but never arrived.
Hadrian?s Gorge, a long stretch of land located deep within one of the gutted mammoth mining chasms, was a microcosm of the planet as seen from above. Between the glut of seedy dive bars, Frej-addicted whores, and black-market dealers hardly making an effort to front legitimate businesses to cover their transactions ? set between mountainous disfigured walls of rock serving as stark reminders of the physical and emotional scars of its inhabitants ? a mercenary could certainly find herself at home. But Estella Tiri didn't feel at home, not at all. Truth be told, although this place was certainly safer for her than elsewhere in the quadrant, or even on the planet, she hated it. But money was here, good money, and she wanted her share.
The casual observer would likely never pick out one place from another down here from memory; it all looked the same and the smart black-marketeers would exchange shops and stalls frequently to throw off anyone who might be looking to put an end to their business. But they always let their best customers know how to reach them. And she was definitely a good customer. She was about to prove it yet again.
Even as she walked, winding her way through the alleys and man-made paths that served as streets which often carved through shells of old buildings that, for one reason or another, were never demolished, she tried to avoid looking anyone in the eye. That was one easy way to get killed down here, especially given the temperment of the local population. Most everyone was paranoid. Most everyone was desperate to leave, looking for an excuse to take out their pent-up frustrations on a passer-by for no reason other than it would make them feel better for a moment or two. The money enticed them to stay, no matter the personal cost.
She didn?t bother trying to mask her path or change her route; if she was being followed, those doing the following would not fall for the simple tactics she could employ. Besides, she didn?t want to spend any more time down here than she had to. Each step brought her closer to her goal and she wasn?t going to delay. Her boots kicked up loose dirt and tread over rotted wood and rusted out metal in a quick rhythm, often interrupted by an the crunch of plastic as she trod upon the empty Frej-tubes whose contents were annihilating the brains and lives of over half the population. The people were destitute, the buildings were destitute, even the air seemed to instill a sense of despair that would rot her from the inside out if she breathed too deeply. She quickened her pace.
A few moments later, upon reaching her destination, she entered a dilapidated metal shack upon which hung an unlit half rotted ?Erroch Repairs? sign, its letters nearly falling off the rusty nails barely keeping them in place, and subjected to the invasive personal search and questioning which followed. No, she didn?t have any weapons. Yes, she was here to see Scheff. Yes, he knew she was coming.
She surmised that this bodyguard was new because she hadn?t ever seen him before and he seemed to be staring entirely too hard at her, as if trying to will her answers to turn into lies underneath his glare.
?Where?s Frank,? she asked, trying to show NewGuy that yes, she had seen Scheff before.
?Dead,? was the grunted reply.
?Ah,? she replied, unsurprised. Playing bodyguard for a successful (and thus nefarious) black market merchant was, after all, dangerous.
?Go ahead,? NewGuy?s gruff voice was mirrored by the brusque way he gestured toward the entryway to the rear of the shop. He seemed disappointed that she?d been able to pass his muster.
?Don?t worry,? she thought as she moved past him, ?you?ll get your chance sooner rather than later down here. And you?ll probably wind up next to Frank in whatever ditch he?s lying in.?
((Authors' Note: This thread will be cross-posted in the Duel of Fists folder on the Rings of Honor message board))