Topic: Revamping of Talomar Longden

Talomar Longden

Date: 2007-09-03 02:22 EST
(Note: the first few postings are a re-post of writing done previously. FireSong's posts are here posted with her permission.)

Firesong departed the Red Dragon Inn the expedient way. She shifted forms to the tiny grey mouse that slipped through the crack in the wall by the hearth. This form suited her sense of humor for who would suspect the harmless looking rodent of being in truth a remorseless killer. Inwardly the Master Vampiress smiled while scampering along toward the Westend in the shadows of the buildings.

The confrontation she had inadvertently walked in on tonight couldn?t have gone better had she planned it herself. The Dark Lord now knew who she protected. They knew there would be consequences should they again threaten or harm those she claimed as hers. Fire had not once unleashed an attack upon the ?Black Wizard? instead she had attempted to bargain with him.

Five souls for each one soul that she protected seemed reasonable to one that killed to live. Thus she had offered the five without hesitation to him in return for a pact to leave those she protected alone hence forth. All was well until she refused to give her life. Never again would Fire be slave to anyone.

The rodent squeaked angrily and was no more for in it?s place upon that thought stood the woman. Her silvery hair in braids with crystalline beads and feathers flowing around her in the midst of the firestorm her aura had become in the visible spectrum. Red leather lovingly hugging voluptuous curves that begged the eye of the beholder to linger those forbidden moments longer than were wise. A glimmering silver chainlink belt slung low to frame shapely hips that swayed that touch when walking that proved this was no girl but a woman full of sensual mysteries whose lips were lush with the promise of secrets to share. Stiletto heeled thigh topping boots along with numerous silver bangle bracelets on both wrists completed her outfit for the night all outlined clearly by the flames licking hungrily around her.

Graveyard cold eyes scanned the area as other senses flared out in search of prey. Fire hadn?t fed before the confrontation and along with the reaction headache setting in, from so much raw node energy being channeled so quickly, Hunger was gnawing at her. Scents and sounds became clearer as all her senses focused upon this one thing, her next meal.

From the looks of the lifeless body tossed aside there was a new widow in RhyDin and perhaps even newly fatherless children. A melodious laugh echoed through the sleeping shadows of the streets as new life flowed through her veins bringing color along with warmth to her skin. The flames withdrew back beneath the surface of her skin to await their next summoning or arousal of her wrath.

Now it was time to finish what she had started upon coming to this end of town. Where was it exactly? She canted her head to the left and closed her eyes as other senses again went seeking for him. She knew him well. She had felt him when he saved her life by risking his own. He had asked about her the night before according to Tasha. She had told Tasha she would come.

There she had it. She moved with preternatural speed using the rooftops to reach her destination. Once there her gaze roamed over the walls and gate in the front. A chuckle was stiffled at the sight of the bronze lions on each side of the gate while an idea took shape. Fire was no ordinary woman and would not be knocking on the door like a peasant. She leaped upwards landing gracefully upon one of the lions. It was not until she was comfortable there that she called out both mentally and in a whisper that she knew without doubt the Count could hear.

?I have come visiting. Will ye not greet me M?Lord??

Talomar Longden

Date: 2007-09-03 02:23 EST
Count Talomar Longden sat in his great chair, right hand to his chin, staring into the fire that was blazing in his study. He had recently returned after feeding on a young lady in an alley outside the Red Dragon Inn, but he was not satisfied. A glass of red wine sat on an end table and a lit cigar was in his left hand.

Nothing satisfied him these days ? not feeding, not killing, not torturing or slaving, and not the scuffles in the Inn. Nothing.

He had seen Tara?s aunt Tasha in the Inn when he entered there for a few minutes. He had also seen Firesong and desired to talk with her, but unfortunately she was already involved in a fight with that melodramatic clown of a wizard, and doing an excellent job. Had she needed help, he would have provided it, but that was not necessary. So instead he gave aid to Tasha rather than take Fire?s fun away. Besides, he always enjoyed watching Fire?s moves. Such observing had been very subtle when he was married. Now it hardly mattered whether he was subtle or not.

He had just placed the cigar to his lips and taken a long puff when he heard a voice calling to him. ?I have come visiting. Will ye not greet me M?Lord??

Who dared to come to his home in the midst of the night? His head slowly turned toward the windows of his second floor study and his head cocked to the side, listening. The voice was familiar. He set the cigar in the ashtray, drank the remainder of his wine, then rose and walked to the leaded-glassed doors that opened onto a small balcony. They opened before him, allowing the cold night air to blow into the room, taking the lace curtains with it.

The Count stepped to the heavy, stone wall of the balcony and stood there in tight, black leather pants, a white ruffled shirt, black boots that came to his knees, black hair that flowed down over his shoulders, and eyes darker than the blackest night. He gazed toward the road to see who this intruder might be who had such little concern for her life. Mortal eyes would have seen nothing, but his penetrated the darkness with ease. A smile creased his lips. The red leather, the shape of her body, the hair ? all was unmistakable. Perhaps this night wouldn?t be such a bore after all.

He put his right hand to the stone wall and vaulted over it, falling more than two stories to the blue stone drive below. He landed and absorbed the fall, going down on one knee, a hand with splayed fingers resting on the stone. Longden rose slowly, his eyes never leaving her. He made a step in her direction and the shadows seemed to engulf him.

There were two huge bronze lions on each side of the drive up to Longden Castle. The Count appeared on the one opposite Firesong. He smiled and lowered his head in a slow nod of greeting.

?You and only you would I greet in such a way and time, my dear Firesong.? His smile was genuine, his eyes grateful for the view. ?I am greatly in debt to whatever has initiated the honor of this visit. To say anything else, why, I would be lion.? He grinned at the play of words.

?Won?t you please join me for a drink?? He looked up to the balcony one hundred yards away where the soft yellow glow of firelight reflected off leaded glass windows, and then his gaze went back to her with a smile.

Talomar Longden

Date: 2007-09-03 02:25 EST
(re-posted for FireSong with her permission)

The Master Vampiress fairly purred at the sight of the Count on the balcony. Like called to like as power called to power. The sight of him was a sweet seduction of the senses that beckoned toward the deepest shadows of the night. Ice blue eyes parted the darkness between them easily.

Not a nuance of motion was missed by those eyes from the instant the fire?s glow first revealed his form. Her melodious laughter rang out accompanied by the soft chime of crystalline beads with the arrogant toss of her head in response to the impressive display of rippling muscles and barely leashed power.

The Count was not a male to toy with yet here she was risking the flames. She was ready to dance with him within the shadows and emerge once more like the phoenix forever reborn anew, immortal. Fire remained reclining at ease upon the bronze lion although he disappeared from sight. She could feel his presence approaching so turned her head toward her makeshift couch?s mate.

?You and only you would I greet in such a way and time, my dear Firesong.?

His greeting was met by a genuine smile that warmed normally icy blue eyes along with a slight nod of her head in his direction.

?I am greatly in debt to whatever had initiated the honor of this visit. To say anything else, why, I would be lion.?

Fire chuckled huskily in that low contralto voice.

?Won?t you please join me for a drink??

She smiled with a whispered, ?No. Come with me, Talomar.? Silver bracelets and belt, slung low around her hips, joined with crystalline beads in soothing chorus. The curve-hugging red leather softly hissed with the motion as the Tayladras smoothly rose to her feet then extended a hand toward the Master Vampire Lord.

Talomar Longden

Date: 2007-09-03 02:26 EST
?No. Come with me, Talomar.?

Firesong?s response was not what Count Longden had been expecting. He had been about to lead her in a quick flight to the balcony, but instead he slowly turned back to her, lowered his head and gazed intently upon her. ?What is she intending?? he thought. He remembered the saying that one who chooses to ride the back of a tiger can never dismount, and he wondered if that also applied to one who stood on the back of a lion.

Firesong was not only an extremely beautiful and sexy woman, but also extremely powerful. The fact that he had once saved her life detracted nothing from the power that she contained. Had he faced what she did, he was sure he would have been on the receiving end of the saving. So when one with such power says, ?Come with me,? the normal response would have been ?where and why?? with a healthy dose of suspicion and concern, if not straight out fear.

Nevertheless, she was his friend and he had no reason to mistrust her. A smile returned to his face and he took her hand into his. He would leave the back of the lion and take his chances.

?Lead on, my dear Fire; I trust that where you intend to take us will be a significant improvement over my humble study.? He enjoyed the feel of her hand in his, and he wasn?t about to release it any time soon.

Talomar Longden

Date: 2007-09-03 02:29 EST
(posted for FireSong with her permission)

The beast that craved ultimate satisfaction growled as her fingers closed around his tightly. Fire did not pull Talomar toward her. She outright pounced. All those feminine curves met their counterparts of hard musculature as thighs wrapped around his lean waist in a secure hold. Her free hand slid up beneath the silk of his hair, gripping the back of his neck, faster than a human?s heart could beat.

The topaz amulet resting in the hollow at the base of her throat began to glow. Her aura snapped and crackled in hues of red and yellow beneath the surface of her skin. She placed her lips against his ear as she whispered while making sure there would be warm, moist breath to caress with the words. ?Say goodbye now.?

Talomar Longden

Date: 2007-09-03 02:30 EST
To any mortal witnessing Fire?s lunge toward Talomar, the movement would have seemed instantaneous, but Talomar?s motion matched hers and his strong arms opened to receive her, pulling her firmly against his body. He stared into her eyes, his dark-as-black soaking in her magnificent blues. His lips were close enough to hers that sweet breath was felt and the alluring fragrance of his body washed over her.

Talomar felt the glow of the topaz amulet; his eyes far too busy taking in Fire?s to be concerned. She put her lips to his ear and whispered, ?Say goodbye now.?

His lips moved to her own ear, his voice a deep whisper, ?A goodbye to all . . . but you, my dear.?

Talomar Longden

Date: 2007-09-03 02:32 EST
(re-posted for FireSong with her permission)

?A goodbye to all . . . but you, my dear.?

The sheer strength in the arms closing around her brought a husky chuckle to life. Fire was well aware of Talomar?s power and gloried in the darkness that flowed within each of them. She delicately raked razor sharp fangs along the artery beneath the flesh of his throat. The barest hint of the tip of her tongue followed the same path thereafter.

The Master Vampiress well knew the dangers of toying with the Master Vampire but the beast was calling to her. There was no turning back now. The night turned into flames hungrily lapping around two figures standing atop a lion?s back silhouetted in what appeared to be a lover?s embrace.

The Count?s words could prove to be eerily prophetic as Fire drew power from the nearest node, tamed it to her hand with practiced ease, while claiming Talomar?s lips in a kiss that was no gentle asking. The moment lush lips met his her tongue demanded entrance to meet his in a dance that was no first exploration but rather a thorough scorching invitation to decadence.

Her hands came up to cradle his face between her palms as the unadulterated plundering continued. The soft hiss of red leather against black mingled with the chime of crystalline beads as she shifted seductively against him. The beast was hungered by the taste and scent of him mingled with the feel of power flowing through the Count.

?A goodbye to all . . . but you, my dear?

Words hold power as always and permission given is permission gained. None knew this better than the Tayladras Adept. Fire had him in her grasp, literally. He had said his goodbye. The amulet and flames glowed brighter and leapt higher around them both fueled by her passion.

Talomar Longden

Date: 2007-09-03 02:32 EST
A column of heated, glowing air rose up over the great bronze lion who sat upon a granite mount on the north side of the drive?s entrance; hidden within that column of flames and light were two immortal bodies wrapped in pure desire. The Count?s left hand moved up Fire?s back, beneath that silvery hair, and held her head captive to the kiss. His right hand pulled the lower part of her body tight against him, as if any space between them was totally unacceptable.

Talomar felt the power of the node rising up and he would not fight it.

On the contrary, he willingly released himself to it, feeding it with his own unnatural powers. This night he would go where she intended, and he would give her everything she bargained for.

And more.

Talomar Longden

Date: 2007-09-03 02:34 EST
(re-posted for FireSong with her permission)

Fire felt the instant Talomar gave himself completely over into her care. Their combined powers fed that unholy beast which raged and thirsted without end each rising. Her body fluidly molded as though they were one being against him. This was the potential she had known was there all along yet could not touch before.

Greed slammed into her mingling with the passion and fury of the firestorm raging around them. She wanted this for her very own. All this power coursing through her could be hers for the taking did she but dare. He had given himself over to her keeping. He was hers now to do with as she pleased.

The night went black where before there had been a firestorm engulfing two apparent lovers embracing. Firesong Sunstrike Aldrack Haze kidnapped Count Talomar Longden with no one in RhyDin the wiser.

It was after all what she did for a living.

Talomar Longden

Date: 2007-09-03 02:34 EST
Does a kidnapping occur when the one being kidnapped goes freely, wanting nothing more than to be wherever the kidnapping might lead as long as it was with his abductor?

Perhaps.

Had Count Talomar Longden known he was being kidnapped, he would have left the philosophical question to others, too consumed with the pleasure of the journey to worry about the destination or intent.

He sensed lust, desire, hunger, and power all emanating from the one named Firesong, but he didn?t sense ill will ? at least not toward him.

For himself, he attacked her mouth ravenously, mouth wide-open upon mouth, firm wet tongues wrestling, breath shared, fists full of hair, loins rubbing, bodies pressed together as though they desired to share the same physical space and were determined to actually do something about it. He wanted her, needed her, and intended to have her in every way imaginable.

This was the first time anyone ever kidnapped him; and aware of it or not, he was going to thoroughly enjoy it.

Talomar Longden

Date: 2007-09-03 02:35 EST
(re-posted for FireSong with her permission)

The warmth of a tropical breeze caressed exposed skin and a rare night bird call could be heard off in the distance. All around were over-sized ferns, flowers, and lush plants in a glorious riot of colors and scents that were pleasing to the eye and senses. The sky was deep midnight blue with scattered clouds drifting in their game of hide and seek with the moon as it watched over the sleeping Vale.

Into the peaceful scene appeared a couple in a passionate embrace. The two were surrounded by hungry flames dancing almost lovingly around them as they kissed. The topaz amulet resting in the hollow of Fire?s throat stopped glowing brightly leaving it merely sparkling like any other finely crafted jewel.

What better way to stay in control than to take the Count away from everything he knew and bring him to where she reigned supreme? This was her home not his. The Heartstone in the center of the Vale granted her an unending supply of energy to draw from should things take a turn for the worse. She wasn?t expecting any trouble but with an extremely powerful male like Talomar it never hurt to be prepared in the initial stages of getting to know each other.

She reluctantly broke the kiss leaving her lips still clinging to Talomar?s as she whispered to him, ?About that drink... ?

The Tayladras had no sooner whispered the words than two hertasi had in place for them a tray with a bottle of red wine and two silver goblets. There were also two neatly folded robes woven of the finest silk along with two towels set on the warm rocks above the steaming pools they had appeared beside.

Talomar Longden

Date: 2007-09-03 02:36 EST
?About that drink . . .?

The Count?s dark eyes slid their penetrating gaze down to the soft white column of her neck in anticipation of a drink that would bring them both to ecstasy. Disappointment surfaced when he saw the Hertasi come with wine and goblets; he then turned back to Fire, a finger placing caressing touches up and down her neck.

?Wine will be a pleasant beginning,? he said in a deep, seductive voice with a hint of a smile.

Talomar then turned and walked several yards away, his back to her as he looked over the vale. Long, black hair cascaded in waves over his shoulders as he raised his arms, lifting them outward to his sides as if giving a blessing. ?A lovely place you?ve brought us to, my dear Fire. Now I know why I?ve seen so little of you in Rhy?Din,? he said in a slow, dark, and oh so teasing voice.

Still facing away from her, he brought his hands to his chest and slowly unfastened the buttons of his white, silk shirt. The shirt was removed and tossed upon a rock, revealing a smooth, muscular back with strong shoulders. ?A bath in these steaming pools would go perfectly with our wine.?

He spun around quickly and faced her, his tight black leather pants only further accenting the nakedness of his strong chest and trim, chiseled abdomen. ?Wouldn?t you agree?? he added with an inviting smile that would draw her to him.

Talomar Longden

Date: 2007-09-03 02:37 EST
(re-posted for FireSong with her permission)

Her prey was in her grasp. The scent of him was driving the beast within her to maddening heights. She was close enough that only the sensual rasp of leather and individual flesh separated the two. The loss of his gaze was a physical sensation that dragged a low moan of denial from kiss bruised lips. The skim of fingers along the sensitive skin of her throat brought a hiss of pleasure along with the leaping of flames higher around the two.

She was suddenly left standing alone amidst the flames of her own passion with the beast within her snarling it?s anger at having it?s next meal escape. Fire kept an unblinking gaze upon her ?guest? as he moved away from her. She didn?t miss a single nuance of masculine beauty from the way the moonlight played off ebony hair that flowed over wide shoulders downward to the smooth ripple of muscles across his back when he tossed his shirt.

The Master Vampiress had never paid much attention to males but this male had things that she wanted. They were not only wanted but craved with a hunger that was unparalleled in her existence. She was going to get them from him whether it be willingly or unwillingly. Fire would have what she wanted.

Talomar?s voice and smile beckoned her nearer to him. It was an invitation the beast was clamoring for. Fire canted her head to the left as a smile warmed icy blue eyes that saw through the shadows between them. She slowly lifted her arms to remove the silver bangles from both wrists and placed them upon a rock beside her. She pivoted only half away from him leaving, no girl child, but a full grown woman?s silhouette outlined in flames as hands came up to release the catch on her top.

One arm folded over the red leather to teasingly hold it in place a bare instant before it would have fallen to reveal a lush bounty as with an arrogant toss of her head she glanced over her shoulder to him. The other hand dropped to rest on the hip slightly tilted toward her prey. There was a teasing glint in the icy blue eyes that met those of deepest black from mere yards away.

He spoke of wine and baths when everything within her vibrated with lust, greed, desire, and the ever present Hunger. The Master Vampire was temptation incarnate to one such as she. Her chance to sate the darkness that called so lovingly to her stood before her smiling invitingly. She prowled toward the Count with a sultry smile.

The Adept?s voice was black velvet entwined in feminine mysteries along with a hint of the shadows now subdued by desire. ?Hai. Share with me Talomar.?

Talomar Longden

Date: 2007-10-27 20:03 EST
Count Longden had tried to delay what he knew was inevitable. Her ardeur had risen to the surface and was threatening to explode with a release of sexual power that none could resist and few survive. He knew what he was getting himself into. He knew and yet he was about to release himself to what she was offering, knowing that she would feed upon his power.

His eyes soaked in the bare breasts of her perfect and powerful body. He could feel her heart pounding and the blood being pumped through it, and the closer she came the more his will to delay the inevitable faded.

?I will share with you, mon ami. Everything.? His large, powerful hands grasped her head and violently pulled her into a kiss, mouth wide open upon mouth. Immediately her ardeur was released and all that she wanted, she was going to get. Unbridled lust and power was there for the taking. The power that was released blew through the vale like a hot, violent wind shear. The clothes that had still be upon their bodies were ripped away leaving naked bodies of immeasurable unnatural power entwined and pressed tightly against each other. Talomar?s tongue invaded Fire?s mouth unmercifully in the release of total lust.

She would feed upon his power and he upon her body, and each upon the other?s blood. The rage of released lust and power had only just begun. It would last for hours.