Topic: The training of a Valet

Talomar Longden

Date: 2005-12-23 02:43 EST
1 - THE KEYS AND THE SAFE

Maria stood in silence by the fire of Tal's room waiting for him as he had requested. She had seen to Eiellani's room then to Tal's before changing into a light red blouse and flowing black and red skirt, nothing restricting and everything silk for his easy access, the collar glittering in the low light, the small flares of silver catching the light. Her head is low, her eyes on the flames, her dark hair spilling over her shoulders lose over her back but pulled back slightly at the sides secured by a silver clasp as she waited nervously for him.

The door to his suite opened and the Count stepped into his room, locking the door behind him. He had really had his travel garments taken from him by servants in the first floor. He now wore only his white silk shirt open at the neck. his black pants were tight around the butt, his trim waist apparent. He wore slipper for his boots were taken from him on the first floor. He held the key to the door in his hand as he walked toward Maria. He had already noticed that Lani's room was perfectly warm and prepared for the Countess. His own suite was equally warm and ready. He saw Maria standing by the fire and he smiled at her.

She shifted feeling his eyes on her more then hearing him and looked back at him over her shoulder before turning back to him, and lifting her chin to expose her neck slightly to him, "Good eve My Love," she breathed softly.

He looked at her neck hungrily. He needed her in every way imaginable. He took her hand in his and kissed it while staring into her eyes. "My love, before I say anything else I just want to let you know how impressed I was with you this evening. You're behavior was perfect (he would not mention her initial refusal to eat as his command) and I was so proud of being with you and the way you behaved. You served the Longden name very well. I couldn't be more pleased with you."

She nods and smiles softly, "Thank you my love, I tried to serve you as you would want me to," she answered softly.

He looked at her standing in the glow of the fire. "I love the way you look tonight with that red blouse and the way you have your hair. Perhaps we should make this your valet attire." He put his finger to his lips and walked around her inspecting her. "Yes...I like it very much."

She does not fallow him, but waits for him to return to her line of sight, "You mentioned training I was unsure how to dress, but it seemed proper to give you free access without ties getting in the way," she answered softly.

He smiled, "Yes, your training should begin. First off, here is the key ring." He handed her the key ring that Philippe had always carried around. "You are to keep the doors to my suite locked, especially when we are in here together."

She nodded accepting the key.

He walked over to the great bookshelf in his suite and went to a book that was titled, 'The Door of Darkness.' "Watch this," he said as he tilted the book forward. A wall panel on the opposite wall opened up and revealed a large safe. "Follow me." He brought her to the safe. "The combination is 7 Left, 7 Right, 3 Left, and 4 right. You don't have to write it out, because if you did and then turned the paper up which it is written upside down; the numbers would spell the word "hELL."

She nods still not speaking just listening.

"In other words, it would be pure hell for anyone who would ever steal anything from me. Now, having said that, I do want you to know that you can take from the safe any amount of money that you need, up to 2000 gold a day. Just record what you take in the ledger. Is that clear?"

She nods, "Yes my love," she answers looking up at him.

He smiled, "Now to more personal ways of serving me. Please, go stand before the fireplace and remove your clothing."

Talomar Longden

Date: 2005-12-23 02:53 EST
(edited for content)

She looks up at him again before moving to the fire once more, slipping the skirt off her hips and letting it fall to the floor before starting to unbutton the blouse before letting it to slip to the floor leaving her in a red lace bra and g-string that she moved to remove as well.

His eyes never left her. He took in the beautiful of every part of her body. "You are so beautiful, my love."

She smiles softly up at him, "Thank you my love," she states softly standing before the flame, her naked clean flesh caressed in the flickering light.

He walked close to her and moved his hand over her body, feeling her shoulders, and then her breasts, coming down her stomach and then pushing over her pubic mound and between her legs. "You feel so good."

She inhales sharply, "I am here for your pleasure my love," she answered softly, "I wish only to please you." She answered softly, "Is this how you would have me greet you at each of our 'meetings'?" She asks, wondering if he'd want her on her knees sense putting the collar on her throat.

"Yes, but there is one change. You should be on your knees. Would you do that for me while I undress?"

She smiles softly, "I had a feeling you would want that," she answered softly as she carefully lowered to her knees, feeling the heat of the fire against her back as waited for him, her eyes never leaving his form.

First his shirt, then his pants, and finally his under shorts went to the foor and were kicked aside. He stepped close to her so that his manhood was next to her face. He waited to see if she would respond correctly.

Maria moved quickly to do what he needed. He moaned and closed his eyes, letting her have her way with him to get him hard. He then opened his eyes and watched her work on him. When he was fully hard he reached down and took her hand and lifted her to her feet.

She moves quickly to her feet, "Forgive me love my not eating, the fruit did not appeal, and the food was cold," she added quickly to try and stave off any anger he may be holding over the event in the inn.

He put a finger to her lips and whispered, "Not now, my love...now is the time for us to feed on each other." With that his mouth came hard against hers in a passionate kiss.

Maria immediately sunk into the kiss, her arm wrapping around his shoulder, the other moving between then to pleasure him.

His tongue delved deep into her mouth, hungry for her. His hand grasping her breast and his other hand on the back of her head pulling her into the kiss.



"My love....my desire.....my Maria..." he whispered.

She groaned softly at his words, her head falling back to rest against the wall as she returned his attentions, "Please love, how may I please you," she whispered against his lips, "let me be more for you."

"I need you now. I must feed. Feed me, my love...my precious," he begged as he released the collar that only he could release. "Give me your throat."

She immediately raised her head for him, baring her throat to him, her heart racing in anticipation, her mind racing with passion and pleasure.


As they made love, the same time he put his mouth to her ear, and slipped his tongue inside, licking her ear before whispering, "I shall take you now. Give me yourself, your neck, your life..."

She swallowed against his words, "Take me," she hissed, her fingers moving to lace into his hair as she raised her chin a little more, giving him even more room, "Please, take me," she cried softly, drawing close to her climax.

His mouth opened wide on her neck, tasting and feeling her neck with his teeth and tongue...leaving wet trails over her neck. His eyes turned to fire and his canines lengthened to sharp needles and rested upon her soft flesh, ready to penetrate.

She whimpered in need, her voice pleading as she speaks again, "Please," she whispers, "please I beg you, take me."

"Yesss," he hisses, "I'll take you....you are mine....you are MINE!" His mouth closed on the neck, the needle teeth sinking into her neck and finding their blood supply. Her blood. His mouth was fully on her, lips pressed against her neck, and he sucked on her.

She cried out as his bite drove her over her edge, her body exploding on his hard, her legs closing tighter on his hips as her body tightened on him, her voice crying out as she let him drink from her once more.

As he continued to make love he pressed her into the wall as his mouth remained in position on her neck, sucking her blood from her, tasting her blood in his mouth. She shivered and cried against his assault, her fingers tight in his hair as she continued on him, his touch driving her higher and higher.



Maria cried out in shock and pain, then groans hotly, her body sinking against his, fully accepting and loving his every touch, even the pain. He had stopped sucking her blood, but had kept his fangs within her, hesitating to stop biting her throat.

She continued to moan in pleasure at his touch, her fingers losing slightly in his hair, her head resting on his shoulder, not moving from under his touch, her fingers working over his shoulders like a content cat.

He allowed his fangs to finally recede and he mended the two puncture holes in her neck. His eyes darkened again and he moved his face against hers, too spent to even talk, letting his kisses and nuzzling let her know how much he loved her. He was hers as much as she was his.

Maria shivered slightly despite the heat of the fire beside them, snuggling in against him, her lips making soft patterns on his bare chest her feet slowly moving to touch the floor once more.

As her feet touched the floor, Talomer bent down and picked her up into his strong arms. His long black hair fell over his shoulders and he looked down upon her face, "Will you sleep with me, my love...my desire?"

"I will do anything you wish my love," she breathed lovingly, her voice a bit shaky after the actions of the night.

"You are my desire...and in our times alone, that's what I shall call you...a name all your own...My Desire." He carried her over to the bed, pulled back the covers and layed her down into his bed for the second night in a row.

She settled in the bed, in much need of the rest after the second night of feeding him, she could feel the room spinning slightly around her.

He extinguished the lamps and only the light of the fire washed the room. He slipped into the bed beside her and pulled her into his arms. "I love you, Maria. Sleep, my love...sleep in your lord's strong arms...dream peaceful dreams.

Maria settled against him, "I should have ordered a large breakfast for the morning," she muttered stifling a yawn as she curled against him, "Thank you my love, I will sleep in your arms every time you permit me," she breathed softly.

"It shall be often, but I'll never take you for granted. Sleep, dear one....sleep."His hand moved over her hair, caressing her again and again until she fell asleep in his arms.